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PostSubject: Jayia's Story Feedback: Pet History   Tue May 04, 2010 12:11 am

Post your feedback for Jayias pet history story here! :3
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PostSubject: Re: Jayia's Story Feedback: Pet History   Tue May 04, 2010 12:52 am

I really liked your story Jayia :3
I liked the fact it was written in Canes perspective, and it seeeems he has a slight bit of a crush on you ;D

but yeah xD it summed you and him up! and your blue and jade obsession! xD

Overall, very well done :3
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PostSubject: Re: Jayia's Story Feedback: Pet History   Tue May 04, 2010 1:05 am

I felt bad for Cane.

"Awwwww, poor baby... ;~; *makes crack fanfiction with Cane, Zane, and Pumpkin*"

It was very well written~

And Cane can't have a crush on Jaaaaaaay! *points to fanfiction* xD
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PostSubject: Re: Jayia's Story Feedback: Pet History   Tue May 04, 2010 1:06 am

Oh, he can. In fact, he does. ;o Doesn't mean he can't like guys more normally. I am just special for him. ;3

And thanks for the praise guys. I appreciate it. <3

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PostSubject: Re: Jayia's Story Feedback: Pet History   Tue May 04, 2010 1:46 am

Nice job Jayjay Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Jayia's Story Feedback: Pet History   Tue May 04, 2010 1:49 am

I already commented once, but I'll do again!

It's awesome! I love it!

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Energetic Bunny of Laughter~ sier (19:42):
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Oh, yeah. And I blush a lot. I bet people think I am cute.

Love you, Jayia ♥️
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PostSubject: Re: Jayia's Story Feedback: Pet History   Tue May 04, 2010 1:51 am

Thanks Chizu. <3

... And I hate your for your sig, you know that. <3

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PostSubject: Re: Jayia's Story Feedback: Pet History   Tue May 04, 2010 1:53 am

You're welcome <3

And I know you love me, deep down inside ;*

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Energetic Bunny of Laughter~ sier (19:42):
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Oh, yeah. And I blush a lot. I bet people think I am cute.

Love you, Jayia ♥️
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