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PostSubject: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Tue May 04, 2010 12:10 am

Post your feedback for Syrials pethistory story here! :3


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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Tue May 04, 2010 12:13 am

I love how Blimes just runs off to another bird forgetting Syrial... xD It's just so... realistic. For Blimes, I mean.

BLIMES YOU FLOOZY! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Tue May 04, 2010 12:28 am

Yeah, I love it too. xD

And sorry for editing your post so, Syri. But the size of the font was hurting my eyes! You know my sight... :3 It's getting even worse...

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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Tue May 04, 2010 12:29 am

xD thats fine Chizu!

I didnt notice you did anything o.o

And thanks you guys! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Tue May 04, 2010 12:31 am

Ah, okay then. xD I guess I didn't do much, except changing size from 12 to 14, it was cluttering in my eyes. And cleaning some up with the headline etc, you know, uhm... yeah, I didn't do much. xD

Anyway, I would like to say that Candara is not a good font to use for longer texts such as stories. The letters become very into each others, and it's rather small. >.o But then again, it might just be my sight alone..

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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Tue May 04, 2010 12:32 am

O.o xD I didnt realise, I just copyed and pasted it from word ^^;
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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Tue May 04, 2010 12:33 am

Ah, that's fair enough. xD ... This is confusing me.

What is this pet contest anyway? xD I haven't heard of it, unactive domo-player as I am.

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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Tue May 04, 2010 12:34 am

Its a contest on domo xD
http://forums.aeriagames.com/viewtopic.php?t=798713

Thats the link! you could win a sara Very Happy


This post is linked in my entry, as part of it is judged on comments, I think ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Tue May 04, 2010 12:36 am

Oh nice. o: Good luck with that! Very Happy You should have a great chance of winning with your Blimes! He is win after all.

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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Tue May 04, 2010 12:37 am

^-^ thank you!

You should enter! >:3 with you and Yaku!
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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Tue May 04, 2010 1:11 am

Always wondered how Blimes got his name. xD

“BLIMES YOU FLOOZY. Get back here! That’s no way to treat a young lady!” The Sylph didn’t sound surprised, she could truthfully admit this happened on more than a day to day basis.

Best line ever~
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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Tue May 04, 2010 1:13 am

xD thank you!

And the Blimes thing is a sorta true story xD

Well, A typo of Blimey! xD and the name stuck!
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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Thu May 06, 2010 1:25 am

OHOHOHOH. BLIMES GOT THE HORN. AHAHAHAHA.

Was amaaaaazin. It was all fancy pantsy and I was thinking "Ohh Syrs getting too posh for us." and then WHAM Horny Blimes.

Best. Story. EVAH.

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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Fri May 07, 2010 9:09 pm

Nice entry Sysy Smile

You make Kukus epic <3
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PostSubject: Re: Syrial's Story feedback: Pet history   Fri May 07, 2010 10:40 pm

I agree with Darr.
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